Lost in the Plot

“Finding himself without his suitcase, Mr Samuel Pilcher remembered his old friend to whom he had once lent three dollars.

It was a bitter, windy night. With an hour to pass before his train would arrive, a walk through the city was far preferable to waiting on the exposed station platform.

As Samuel recalled, this friend had worked in a cafe just two or three blocks from the train station, a short walk that perhaps would give him the opportunity to remember where he had misplaced his suitcase.”

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Benjamin

May 19th, 2009

very nice, is there more on the way?

Neal

May 21st, 2009

Thanks, yes- this is the very beginning of a short story I wrote a few years ago. I want to go through and edit it again before posting the rest…
Glad you like it!